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Water
by Sonia Coleman

By: DMichaels	I think it was Mark ...
By: Geek	Good start. Good descriptions--captured the ...
By: David Griffin	It's an unassuming piece of ...
By: Wyatt	Very nice. A very well ...
By: E. W. Adams	Water is great. There ...

Water deep green

Dock slightly rocking

My sister laughing

Playing with the big kids

Big fish

Glints silver

Catches my eye

So close

I want it

Want to catch it

Reach down

Grab it

Scared

Darkness

Green above

Hands paddling, feet kicking

Choking

Can’t breathe

Sinking

Hand high, reaching

Lifted

Light

Safe

Dad’s arms