Review for: Water
reviewed by Vip Malixi

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By: DMichaels	I think it was Mark Twain that said,"If I'd had more time, I'd written less". Good job at capturing this moment in only a few words....
By: David Griffin	It's an unassuming piece of writing and despite the fact that it's written on one level of understanding only, this neat "memory" poem grows on you the more times you read it. I prefer poetry to resonate with other elements of understanding rather than a straightforward story written as poetry and so for that reason I'm giving "Water" three stars....
By: Wyatt	Very nice. A very well written and executed poem....
By: E. W. Adams	Water is great. There are, for me, allusions of salvation and redemption. It also brings back a childhood memory with going underwater....

Date: 02-19-2009 10:28 pm
Score:

Good start. Good descriptions--captured the moment. Ending too predictable though. Still, has potential.